michellemaldonado455

Sorry to bother everyone peeps but I need your help with one of my stories 'All for you', I need some honest feedback so that I'll know what I need to work on or my Oc's development... In other words, Constructive Criticism... I'm begging you guys!

lindawangwang

I absolutely love ur demon slayer x naruto story ‘ unconditionally yours’ and I can’t wait for more chapters.

lindawangwang

In all honesty the last chapter was my favorite. The bond they had with each other was sweet. I also liked that tsunade will be taking care of them.
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michellemaldonado455

@lindawangwang thank you so much, if you don't mind me asking, but what do you like about it? What is your favorite chapter?
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shiz2790

Hii long time no see

michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790 I'll keep that in mind
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shiz2790

@michellemaldonado455 ohh, I see! Well you should!
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michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790 I'm thinking about getting it but I'm not sure
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shiz2790

Hii, hru?

michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790  that's good to hear, I'm glad
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shiz2790

@michellemaldonado455 same
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michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790 I'm doing amazing hby?
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shiz2790

Hii

michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790 I'm doing amazing
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shiz2790

@michellemaldonado455 Great, hbu?
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michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790 hello, how are you?
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shiz2790

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