michellemaldonado455

Sorry to bother everyone peeps but I need your help with one of my stories 'All for you', I need some honest feedback so that I'll know what I need to work on or my Oc's development... In other words, Constructive Criticism... I'm begging you guys!

single__af

Hello  i hope you're doing great. 
          I just finished your Tokyo revengers fic, and let me tell you, it was one of the best i have read. 
          I sincerely hope that one day you will be able to continue the fic. 
          

single__af

@single__af Hello <3 I am so happy that you will be updating your story. I hope your doing well<3 so ofc my favorite character from your story is ofc Nana(tbh at first I thought she was evil and quite rude), i love how selfles and kind she is and also the fact that she is willing to sacrifice everything for the ones she loves is beautiful.The way you made her to be is just so good. Well, the character that I hate is Nanas ccousin.(omg, the hate that I have for that guy) like in what world would you brake your cousins arm and torment her just like her other family members but I know that he's there for the plot, and I love it. The story is amazing. Truthfully, it's one of the best I've read out there (like I was giggling and throwing my feet in the air at 3 a.m). I hope this letter isn't too long and it won't be a bother while reading. Thank you for writing back <3. You have my full support <3.
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michellemaldonado455

@single__af thank you so much for liking my story, I really appreciate it, I will be updating very soon... if you don't mind me asking, what is your favorite part in the story? Your favorite character and who don't like and why? It will give me more motivation to keep up with this story more, thank you and hope you enjoy this book and support it till the end  
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officialwifeofobanai

Ty for adding my story onto your reading list! :)

michellemaldonado455

@officialwifeofobanai you're very welcome, keep up the good work, your doing great 
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lindawangwang

I absolutely love ur demon slayer x naruto story ‘ unconditionally yours’ and I can’t wait for more chapters.

lindawangwang

In all honesty the last chapter was my favorite. The bond they had with each other was sweet. I also liked that tsunade will be taking care of them. 
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michellemaldonado455

@lindawangwang thank you so much, if you don't mind me asking, but what do you like about it? What is your favorite chapter?
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shiz2790

Hii long time no see

michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790 I'll keep that in mind
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shiz2790

@michellemaldonado455 ohh, I see! Well you should! 
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michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790 I'm thinking about getting it but I'm not sure
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shiz2790

Hii, hru? 

michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790  that's good to hear, I'm glad
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michellemaldonado455

@shiz2790 I'm doing amazing hby?
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shiz2790

Hii