Hey well for starters good for u for uploading a book because I haven't done that yet. It was really good so far, a little fast paced but it's only three chapters in so far so that's kind of expected. I think u have a really good writing voice. I know it's the beginning of the story but I would like to see u introduce some more characters besides Mia, Dave, and Mia's mom. Idk maybe talk about her old friends or some people at her school. I get that's she's kind of a loner but I think it would add some more depth and be interesting. But it's really good so far and I really like it. Keep up all the good work
