bright after rain

Hello! I really need your help to boost my book seventeen imagines! No you don't need to vote or follow me. I just need your feedback about my writing skills. You can be honest about it and I need your clear opinion if it's good or bad. Thank you so much just click on my profile!

Good day! Just dropped by to share with you this book.
          
          Title: The Rain's Burden 
          Status: Completed
          Genre: Romance, One Shot
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/50266970-the-rain%27s-burden-one-shot
          
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hi unnie,a girl told me if i leave ARMY she will never be my friend. I'm so sad that a friend will go away from my own hands. I feel so sad~~~~ :''''< help. I need alot

thaaaaaaaank youuuuuuu so much for voting on my story, thirty-one days ❤️ i luv u ;))