EnigmaWings

Okay, so i read your prologue, and it sounds really good, There are a few grammatical mistakes, but i can tell that it'll come out just fine. As you may already know, every story has a bit of realism in it, so remember to mix it up and captivate that audience with your descriptions as well as a whole ton of cliffhangers. Other than that, you have a really good start. Keep it up :D