Hey Rina!
Read your Hawaiin book and I must say, I loved the change of culture. The plot is refreshing and the layout is a welcome change. There's an air of mystery created by the synopsis that eggs me on to read further.
My only complaint is short chapters, I mean I really do want to read more and I can't wait for the next update!!
In return, could you please check out my book "Because I'm A Nerd" and tell me how you found it?
I am trying to get better as a writer and any feedback will help!
Thanks xx