Chrystallized
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Hey! So brace yourself cuz this is gonna be a long ass message x) I just finished reading your book Incongruous Elements (and then spent the next half hour stuffing my face in my pillow and trying not to cry but still crying cuz I'm an emotional little shit like that and also cuz why did it have to end????) Needless to say I loved it. My heart will forever be broken cuz of the fact that Ivory and Macy didn't end up together but that's only the hopeless conventional romantic in me talking. The book was breathtaking but like you had mentioned in your Author's Note you should definitely Edit and rewrite it cuz it's in the way to being a masterpiece if only it could be worked on a bit more. And I just wanted to also extend my help (if needed) in helping you to edit and sort it out. It's just...You know it's hard to describe but you know the feeling when a book touched your heart in a way that there's no way in hell you'll ever forget it in your life and Macy and Ivory are safely tucked away in my permanent memories now. I also wanted to say that don't wait around for your number of readers to grow to make the book perfect. The fanbase will grow in its own time. I was worried about not having enough readers so much so that I got dejected about it right from the second chapter of my book itself. And I haven't finished it till now and it's been on hold since forever and i don't even know if I'll ever finish it. But yours is and you've got the opportunity to fine tune it into the absolute masterpiece it is meant to be. So yeah I mean it about giving my help in editing the book, if you'll ever need it (you're an amazing writer so I doubt it) Anyway thanks for giving me IE to read. And I hope one day I'll own my own Book of Life too :) Much love x