@winxrosame Hi! First and foremost, be yourself. Don't think of the result, just enjoy the process of writing it.
After each chapter, read it as if you are a reader. This would make you feel part of the readership and it's really enjoyable ^_^
While you are writing, you are not just someone who writes a story. You are the person that experiences the things that you write about. You are not just telling your readers what happens, you are in the story, you are in this world.
Imagine you have experienced something very shocking, or romantic, or important, and you are talking to your best friend. Your best friend would want to know all details about it, right? And you would describe the feelings as faithfully as possible.
That's how it works. Be yourself. Be your story. The story is you, and you are the reason why everything happens. Everything that happens in the story is how you wanted it to happen.
Let everything happen exactly how your emotional self wants it to, without trying to find reasons for it. And you will definitely enjoy writing your story.
And last but not least...
Love your story!