mikhailthreecrow

New story I'm working on, would appreciate feedback.
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/388187390

nuwa_kai

@mikhailthreecrow cool! will give yours  a read on friday :)
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nuwa_kai

@mikhailthreecrow hi mikhail, would you like to do a r4r?
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BsrAngel

          
          Hello darling 
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dardanqerkini

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          Sorry for spamming your feed, I just wanted to let you know that I published a new chapter of my book, and I would appreciate it if you would go check it out and left your thoughts in the chapter:
          
          Dardan Qerkini, wishes you a great week & weekend ahead!

dardanqerkini

Hey thanks so much for your review, I noted everything down as to what should I do for my next chapter, so do you want to do F4F?

dardanqerkini

@mikhailthreecrow so basically, what you're saying is that I should have POVs for my characters, right?
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mikhailthreecrow

@dardanqerkini Well, maybe we aren't discussing the same thing. A character profile usually isn't published, it's a tool for you to use when writing. For example, my character profiles are basically a psychological profile for the character. I use this to ask myself: how would a character with "x" personality traits react to "x" situation? A psychological profile will help you answer all the questions that you need to ask yourself when writing. Okay, here is an example. Your character walks into a bar, what would that character's internal impression be? A Baptist preacher's reaction would be very different from a construction worker that spends all his money on alcohol. Here's a writing tip that follows this advice: Stay in [character's] viewpoint: imagine the crucial sense or thought impressions that [character] is experiencing at any given moment; present [character's] impressions as vividly and briefly as possible; present [character's] impressions to the reader in a logical order.
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dardanqerkini

@mikhailthreecrow I was thinking of making a profile for my characters, but I thought that it would be too much, because you know, people have a short attention span these days, so I didn't bother making them
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mikhailthreecrow

New story I'm working on, would appreciate feedback.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388187390

nuwa_kai

@mikhailthreecrow cool! will give yours  a read on friday :)
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nuwa_kai

@mikhailthreecrow hi mikhail, would you like to do a r4r?
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