Dear mil-e-cah101,
I'm not trying to come and say this to be mean or anthing. In your story Computer Crush you should use proper grammar. I know it's hard to upload a story and have tons of people seeing it, but when you have things like "u" instead of you or, "i" instead of I, or w/ for with, or omg, it gets kind of distracting. I am not trying to be rude, but I can't fully enjoy the book. (which is, by the way, amazing!) Also, please upload a little more often? I know we all have lives to live that aren't on Wattpad, and like you said: you have a short attention span and you don't know where the book is going, at least try to come close to an ending because your fans are anxious to keep reading. (like me!)
*Done with criticism*
Other than that I love your book! The way it's put together is great.