millekosmos

I'm doing some editing, so that there will be fewer but longer chapters instead of these annoyingly short ones. I don't know if I'll edit anything else, but I hope this will make the story more fast paced. I'll keep you posted!

millekosmos

I'm doing some editing, so that there will be fewer but longer chapters instead of these annoyingly short ones. I don't know if I'll edit anything else, but I hope this will make the story more fast paced. I'll keep you posted!

thewritestone

Hey Emilie,
          
          I'm here in response to a comment you left in my thread Well-Written Books Wanted for Popular Blog. I have a link for you to check out, which will have all the info you need to know about this opportunity I'm offering unpublished authors.
          
          In short, I have an activity called Book Of The Week (BOTW), which was created to discover good books on wattpad and showcase them to visitors of my blog.
          
          To find out how to nominate your book for BOTW, head to this link:
          http://www.wattpad.com/30121481-talisman-of-el-t-o-e-trilogy-book-1-cby-book-club
          
          Here's the link to the blog:
          http://cbybookclub.blogspot.co.uk/
          
          Do read the whole page to familiarise yourself with the function of BOTW. Thanks for stopping by the thread and commenting.
          
          Alecia :)

millekosmos

@soitshannah It's forever since we talked on wattpad, but i just wanted you to know that I haven't forgotten about you these last weeks. My phone was being fixed you see ;) (I shatterd my screen. Well done me.) Anyways, since my snapchat was delited, and I have NO idea what my password is, we gotta find sine other way to communicate for the time being :)
          
          Hope you're well <3
          
          (Btw; i've uploded a story, would you mind telling me what you think? I would appritiate your appinion :* )

millekosmos

""Then why wouldn't she pick her phone up?"Mandy ask.
          
          "She didn't have any pockets in the dress,"Danny says with Marisa examining the two a few feet away.
          
          Rhy and Chase push past the three and come up the steps of the porch. Rhy takes his key out and unlocks the front door for us. As soon as the door's open I rush in and stumble on my first few steps. Blood is also a huge scent in the house now and I know it's Ashlee's.
          
          I whimper and stop dead in my tracks for a second and force myself forward with the two guys by my side. I follow the scent until we stop dead in front of the bathroom where It's the strongest. I slowly push the door open and pain shoots all through me when I see a small amount of blood on the floor and wall. It smells fresh, but I'm still confused on why I don't smell Lezley's scent.
          
          "What do we do now?"Rhy whispers from behind me.
          
          "Look for where they could be,"Chase says in an uneven tone that suggest he's angry too." http://wattpad.com/story/3951869