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milomars__

Feb 22, 2024 01:41AM

Please give me construstive criticism on what you think of the story. Hopefully, I can post one chapter a week here of my first draft of a book I hope to publish soon.

milomars__

Feb 22

Please give me construstive criticism on what you think of the story. Hopefully, I can post one chapter a week here of my first draft of a book I hope to publish soon.