mimibobimi

Hey hey hey! Check out my recently published collection of short stories.
          	http://my.w.tt/UiNb/z1MUewxHUz

mimibobimi

Hey hey hey! I'd love to hear some feedback on my short story here, I need tips on how to improve it haha. If y'all could read it and message me about what you think would improve it, that would be the bomb diggity!
          http://my.w.tt/UiNb/gh2qriaOcz

VernelJessAsparin

@mimibobimi welcome. I like helping.
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mimibobimi

@verneljessasparin that's true, thanks for the feedback!
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VernelJessAsparin

@mimibobimi I think it would be nice if you had, thrillings and "emotions". If you had it, I guess you would also need to make or create problems.
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