min_holy_suga

OK...... I'VE FINALLY MANAGED TO PUBLISH THE BOOK *WHISPERS* ITS RLLY GOOD,, STRONG POWER THANK YOU.... yours; p.jm

vko0ki

Hey fam!
          Was wondering if you can take a look at my story. It's 18+ and lgbt, so if you're underage or don't read such stuff then ignore this message..... haha
          Anw have an amazing day, I hope you smile a lot. God bless ♥️

INeedSomeJamz

*whispers* by the way u love ur profile pic. Totally gucci

INeedSomeJamz

*whispers* heart breaker
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min_holy_suga

@CookieKhushi21 *whispers* strong power thank you
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INeedSomeJamz

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Peachxculture

Hi!
          Please take a look at my new story 
          I'm looking for constructive feedback and would love to know what you think about it
          
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/LVnpD43CyI

min_holy_suga

@Peachxculture hiiii!!! I think your story is really good considering that this is your first book...it definitely had me interested in it and its in my private reading list rn. The only thing I would say is to try and keep the paragraphs short...instead of 7 long paragraphs, how about 14 shorter ones??? Idk what its like for others but i know that shorter  paragraphs generally looks nicer and it feel nicer to read, but its your book, you do what you want. Once again it's a great idea and im sure its gonna continue well
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