mindofthesufferer

Moving house again :/

storyzrok

:D hey sis

storyzrok

@Georgiaflies wait what? I WOULD NEVER MAKE HER HATE YOU that is probably one of the biggest sins in islam astagfirullah but u no cant change the moody kick a fight way u r can I? 
            do not reply
Balas

storyzrok

@Georgiaflies  I dont know if your doind this to get me bad name or something but Im not bothered I simply said hey sis to her and ur rippin m head of and I dont think ur frnd wud like dis on her MB I wouldn't personally so leave me alone
Balas

storyzrok

@Georgiaflies and how would you know? your not a muslimah you cant judge me only ALLAH can judge me so STOP
Balas

mindofthesufferer

Hi guyss! Sorry I've been super busy with starting my new college and being pounded with work. However, I am having a week break and whenever I have the time I will dedicate it completely to writing my book or editing your amazing stories. Again, sorry for being a pain in the bum. ;) Stay extraordinary xxx

nameeramariyam

Hii there, I love your writing. I just wanted to ask if you could help in editing, I saw your post on this club. And Im new to wattpad I mean I had an account but never really used it. Im working on a book, i started just 2 days back. Please help. Im still trying to figure out how to use wattpad tho.
          
          Title- I found superman briefs under my pillow cover
          
          Description: "And the bad boy falls in love with the good girl and they live happily ever after."  Well that's just too cliché, isn't it? 
          
           That's anything but Alexa's and Ryan's story.
          
           [Alexa's POV] 
          
          Imagine this, you're in your Hello kitty night suit and all you can think about is waffles with Nutella and the love of your life, your bed. And just when you're  ready to cuddle with your pillow, you feel something tangled with your super long hair and you find, SUPERMAN briefs under your pillow cover and just when you think that you can deal with this later, you find Ryan Walters passed out under your bed. 
          
          This is how we met, this was the start of something which I believe wasn't possible unless I was in wonderland and I had to marry a rabbit. This was not my story, but our story
          
          e-mail id- nameeramariyam@gmail.com
           PLEASE HELP. THANKS :)

breakalegstyles

I like your writing it sounds smart and i was wondering if you'd be willing to edit my fanfictions... im horrid with grammer but i feel like my stories would have ptebtial if they had better grammer....
          
          Title: Insidious (Harry Styles) 1D Awards
          
          Description: Exploring the fate of love and recovery together as their relationship builds. What will happen throughout their journey? Will it be love or broken hearts? 
          
          ...Did I mention we now have a thing. 
          
          He wraps his arms around my waist and places a kiss to my forehead, then to the tip of my nose, and then before he presses his lips to mine he says "Tu es `a moi." and after he kisses me that's when I pull him in for a more heated and passionate kiss, "Je suis."
          
          ...
          
           The story of how two messed up beings fall for each other in a matter of hours and fall in love in a matter days. They go through an adventure that ranges from a therapy ranch to suprizes in the end.
          
          thats what i have but its horrid i know... idk i NEED help
          
          Genre: Fanfiction

mindofthesufferer

Please pm me
Balas

kaybello

Hey there, I saw you are available for editing..my english is kinda crappy..so if you can edit it..it's a new one. It'll be great please!
          
          Title: Not broken Enough
          
          Description is really crappy..help me in that too please.
          
          Genre: General Fiction.
          
          
          Broken Sapphire Delacruz, she tries to pick up the pieces. She tries to remind herself that she's not broken enough to die. But when times goes on, life changes & she finds herself getting involved with two boys who take her breath away. Well it's her journey to find herself and who she really is..after all past never changes. Past is a part of our lives. It somehow defines our way of living..our life.
          
          I have perfect plot in mind but can't put it properly..it's basically Augustus' Problem: "My thoughts are Stars that I can't fathom into constellations" haha, it would be lovely if you can help and give me some tips

Harryisacupcakeeeee

Hey there love! I saw that you offered to edit any story free of charge! If you are still offering to edit, I'd be overjoyed if you could edit my story for me! If not, that's perfectly fine too.
          
          Title: Untouchable beauty
          
          Summary:
          He was always hidden in the shadows. Quiet, stealthy and invisible.  I couldn't help but be drawn to him. What was he hiding? Why was he hiding?  His green eyes that gleamed like a cat and his dark brown hair curled into dark ringlets. He was beautiful but he was the dangerous kind of beautiful. He was an untouchable beauty. He was Harry Styles. 
          
          Genre: Romance, (would One Direction count as a genre?)
          
          It would be lovely if you could edit my chapters as I go but if you can't then can you edit one that I'm writing right now when I'm finished. If that makes any sense at all. Thanks so much if you can. If not, thank you anyway.

mindofthesufferer

Can you please pm me
            thanks
Balas