minero586

hey guys just uploaded the first chapter of my new story you can go and check it out if you want 

dracula1673

:) I'll be very honest, every time Snotlout opens his mouth he talks nonsense. Look at this idiotic plan he came up with, did he really think his old friends would beat Hiccup? Wow, I had an idea. How about Hiccup call the Green Death and make Snotlout fight the gigantic dragon alone without any weapons, just to show what happens when you underestimate your opponent. How about that?

dracula1673

:) hi New idea for you. After some time on the island of the outcasts, Hiccup finds a way to send a message to Grimmel and Toothless and says that it was time to use the heavy artillery, so Toothless and Grimmel go after Hiccup on the island of the outcasts and take the dragon Death Scream with them and as soon as they get Hiccup out of there, Death Scream starts digging tunnels and making the whole island sink into the sea while Hiccup and company watched everything safely. What do you think?

minero586

@dracula1673 I was planning on using a Prison escape from an anime I watched where Hiccup helps Drago bludvist break out that was their plan all along 
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dracula1673

:) Every time I think that Hakon couldn't go any lower in terms of naivety, he does this to me. He's really going to embarrass himself confessing to Astrid.

minero586

@dracula1673 i just want there to be a 5 year time skip so When the Raid happens Hiccup deosnt forgive anyone 
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minero586

@dracula1673 hmm i was thinking of this idea more like a times kid a few years when Hiccup turns 19 and close to his 20's i was thinking Hiccup visits Berk again to make some sort of deal Grimmel had thought of much to Hiccups disapproval Astrid shows her affection my somewhat free falling off a cliff tempting Hiccup to save her after awhile Hiccup deosnt move a muscle till he finally goes through it and jumps down after her how does that sound or how would you do it 
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dracula1673

@minero586 :) Well here we have two options. The first is for her to corner Hiccup and say that Hakon kissed her without her consent. And the second is when he goes into the arena to fight Hakon, Astrid approaches and says that Hakon kissed her without her consent and wants Hiccup to avenge her honor. Which one do you choose?
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dracula1673

:) I'm not going to lie, Hakon is too innocent. He still hasn't realized that that's the hiccup, if it were you or me we would have realized it by now, don't you think?

dracula1673

@minero586 :) So we can do it like this, after Hiccup almost kills Hakon and leaves him on the verge of death, Stoic orders Hiccup to be arrested. and then he goes there to talk to Hiccup to try to understand why he left Berk but Hiccup just says that he won't answer Stoick's questions and says that he should give the title of heir of Berk to Hakon or Solfrid, because he doesn't want anything to do with Berk and that he already has a goal in life and Berk wasn't part of that goal and that he wouldn't stay in Berk. what do you think?
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minero586

@dracula1673 i was thinking about that when I first started this story about Hiccup wanting to get the throne and be the Chief but I'm laying on 50,50 over here
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dracula1673

@minero586 :) Exactly, it will be a shock when he discovers that he is fighting against his own brother, and it will be even more of a shock for Solfrid when he realizes that she had a crush on her own brother, and they even try to make Hiccup stay in Berk after the tournament but he denies it and proclaims himself an exile because he has no interest in leading Berk. what do you think about this?
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dracula1673

:) So hard to understand the heart
          And so many times I tried
          I believe in a love story
          In a beautiful dream (in a beautiful dream)
          I know I will live
          An angel came to talk to me
          Love came to me
          Came to show me
          The dream has no end
          And it doesn't matter how much time passes
          (I'll wait for you)
          And it's never been this strong
          I heard an angel speak to me
          (An angel speak to me)
          How many times have I dreamed of a kiss
          A affection that I have never felt
          I know that one day you will be here
          In a beautiful dream (in a beautiful dream)
          In your arms is where I want to be
          Came to talk to me
          Love came to me
          Came to show me
          A dream has no end
          And it doesn't matter how much time passes
          (I'll wait for you)
          And it's never been this strong
          I heard an angel speak to me
          (An angel speak to me)
          All the love I've ever looked for
          You came to show me
          I know you are my angel
          The love I always dreamed of
          I know you are my angel
          Angel
          And it doesn't matter how much time passes
          (I'll wait for you)
          And it's never been this strong
          I heard an angel speak to me (an angel came to speak to me)
          Love came to me
          Came to show me
          That it doesn't matter how much time passes
          (I'll wait for you)
          And it's never been this strong
          I heard an angel tell me yeah eh.

dracula1673

:) If I'm not mistaken, the next fight will be Hiccup with Hakon or someone else?

dracula1673

@minero586 :) hum, interesting. Do you intend for Hiccup to disown the Haddok family?
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minero586

@dracula1673 for Snotlout that'll come later i was thinking after Hiccups imprisonment a few years later thats when Hiccup will get hes revenge and for rejecting Astrid apology that will be something I will write about 
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dracula1673

:) new idea for you, after hiccup kills the drago he receives information about the jormungandr who was the most dangerous dragon of all and hiccup wanted to arrest this monster because he was pure evil and killed everything he saw in front of him and every time he killed a living being he doubled in size. what do you think about this?