minero586

hey guys just uploaded the first chapter of my new story you can go and check it out if you want 

dracula1673

:) If I'm not mistaken, the next fight will be Hiccup with Hakon or someone else?

dracula1673

@minero586 :) hum, interesting. Do you intend for Hiccup to disown the Haddok family?
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minero586

@dracula1673 for Snotlout that'll come later i was thinking after Hiccups imprisonment a few years later thats when Hiccup will get hes revenge and for rejecting Astrid apology that will be something I will write about 
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dracula1673

:) new idea for you, after hiccup kills the drago he receives information about the jormungandr who was the most dangerous dragon of all and hiccup wanted to arrest this monster because he was pure evil and killed everything he saw in front of him and every time he killed a living being he doubled in size. what do you think about this?

dracula1673

:) Let's come and face it, Hakon is very naive about a lot of things. He doesn't even remember causing the death of Hiccup's friend.

minero586

@dracula1673 just good and I think i have the perfect fight for that search up Cosmo Imai vs Akoya Seishu on YouTube I'll only use half of the fight there for Hiccup to torture Hakon and then later revial what he has done 
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dracula1673

@minero586 :) hum so we can do it like this, when hiccup is beating hakon he starts yelling at his ex brother and starts quoting his deceased friend ordering hakon to remember her that he and the twins and snotlout are to blame for her death and that it was these three who set fire to the weapons shed and that hakon was responsible for her death and hiccup continues beating hakon while screaming. what do you think about this?
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minero586

@dracula1673 oh she does but she deosnt mention her because she can't of how painful it is to mention her best friend well Ex best friend
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dracula1673

hi :)

minero586

@dracula1673 ooh a giant dragon targeting Berk hmm maybe I'll consider it
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dracula1673

@minero586 :( ahhhh no, no, no It's not Stoick who's going to do this, it's Hiccup himself who's going to look for Jormungandr and he's going to try to train the most dangerous dragon in the world and Hiccup is going to simply leave Berk in the dragon's hands and just watch as Berk is destroyed by the dragon's relentless beast and then he's going to kill the dragon and keep the army for himself.
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minero586

@dracula1673 Stoick betraying his own Village...i wouldn't say is a bad idea but it's not really something he would do and he wouldn't have gotten revenge considering he also abounded Hiccup because he was too weak at the time 
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dracula1673

:) I loved the new chapter about the angel born in hell, this tournament idea is really cool and it would also be really cool if Hiccup went there with his natural hair color and said that he went with Grimmel of his own free will because Berk couldn't help you reach your true potential, what do you think?

minero586

@dracula1673 thats...actually sounds like a good idea but I'll see if I can add Hiccup dying his hair back during the fight 
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dracula1673

:) I loved the new chapter about the angel born in hell. and I have another suggestion, these two who are beating Hiccup, how about we don't kill them yet and let them be killed by Hiccup itself when he returns to Berk, what do you think of that?

dracula1673

@minero586 :) ok athelstan for the first and second could be hvitserk these are two viking names what do you think?
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minero586

@dracula1673 hmm propably but i need like somewhat a Viking name 
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dracula1673

@minero586 yes their names could be pig face, and broken bone. what do you think of that?
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dracula1673

hi I loved the first chapter :)

dracula1673

@minero586 :) ok and you can also appear in your story, you know. like you put a character inspired by you in the story.
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minero586

@dracula1673 sttt i still don't know about it but I'll try and see if I can add that
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dracula1673

@minero586 :) not so much. It's just you because Hiccup starts hitting the drago with more and more hatred, and with more force until he completely crushes the drago's head and everyone in Berk sees him doing this so Hiccup turns around and asks if there is anyone else who wants to share the drago's fate. what do you think of that?
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