@mini_lilac
hello my fellow follower
saya decide untum revamp His Salvation, Her Damnation, so akam ada beberapa bab yang akam saya unpublish...
jangan risau, sakit mana pun perjalanan cerita ni, saya akan pastikan dia orang dapat happy and a little bit bittersweet ending
it's a dark romance after all
bab 2, revamp ver
since the early ver terlalu lemah cerita dia
https://www.wattpad.com/1549365437?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=mini_lilac
should I post His Salvation, Her Damnation revamp ver
Like the original version part one cerita ni.
Age
Leon- 21 tahun
Lilith-19 tahun
Revamp ver
Leon- 25 tahun
Lilith- 19 tahun (Age gap tropee)
Lepastu part dua, takde preganancy trope, I think it's a cheap move untuk Leon trap Evelyn, I want him to deep dive abt that book so he can trap her, at the end he realise it's slowly killing him too
Awal" part one memang akan highkight betul how Ldon betul' bencikan Velhara, and how struggle Lilith, Karina, Kai and Matthe untum sdmbunyikan rahsia sampailah Gabriella decide untuk betray diorang semua.
Mungkin Part one more Leon and Lilith sweet moment, sampailah enemies to lovers Leon dan Evelyn.
And also the t0rture scene akan lebih gore, aku dah penat balik" cabut kuku (thanks to @fatyaraede sebab bagi komen)
why do I feels like no one read this
https://www.wattpad.com/story/395859929
@mini_lilac emang maybe we should lower our expectations. Tapi perlahan setidaknya satu dua pembaca. Aku sendiri writing akhirnya ga pikir pembaca. Belakangan ikut paid promote wp aja akhirnya..
Work really stress me out, I'm losing motivation, feeling numb too
seeing the old me use to be so excited abt writing, now it's just numb, I can't really talk about my writing to anyone
I want to work for my degree, now I'm feeling lost. I'm so sad that I feel like no one reading ts
anyway, that fuckass supervisor is super gay and make it like everyone bussiness lol
@FranzCha23 I keep on publishing and no one comment so i keep assuming no one actually read my story.. dengan stress kerja nak release dgn writing, end up stress balik dgn writing
still far from the most insane plot twist of this story
https://www.wattpad.com/story/395859929
improvise sikit
https://www.wattpad.com/story/395859929
SHOULD I GIVE HIM PLOT ARMOR LIKE GABRIELLA DID?
https://www.wattpad.com/story/395859929
WHY AM I STARTING TO GIVE UP ON MY STORIES???
I REALLY WANT TO END IT, I'M LOSING MOTIVATION LOL