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HIS SALVATION HER DAMNATION
          	PART TWO : CAT AND MOUSE PLAYS
          	
          	So the map goes
          	
          	CAT - DAVIKA
          	
          	MOUSE - GABRIELLA, LEON, TRC, LORD BARRETT
          	
          	While Kai and Felix is actually run back and forth try to stop everything.
          	
          	Felix try to fix everything as if his life isn't any better .

mini_lilac

HIS SALVATION HER DAMNATION
          PART TWO : CAT AND MOUSE PLAYS
          
          So the map goes
          
          CAT - DAVIKA
          
          MOUSE - GABRIELLA, LEON, TRC, LORD BARRETT
          
          While Kai and Felix is actually run back and forth try to stop everything.
          
          Felix try to fix everything as if his life isn't any better .

mini_lilac

new tea about novel's platforms
          
          Mafia ft ustaz yang hafal 30 juz al-quran, american, italian, korean, sepanyol, malaysia (ofc he is malaysian) also the ceo, racer, biker booktok husbands ofc, and somehow I'm afraid he is the king of this world (I SWEAR I'M JOKING LMAO)
          
          It's classic that underage author writing the gary-sue character, rhe ML is handsome and allat. (aku pernah di fasa wattpad tulis cerita zaman sekolah guna nama tengku mix nama english lmao, arrest me! it's Tengku Adrian Volkov someone kill me!)
          
          I can't say anything about her, sebab masih budak kan. But, as and adult shouldn't bullying her. Tegur je baik-baik. Tak pasal-pasal down pula budak tu.
          
          But, reading into her deluluness make me remember how cringe my story back then. Thank god, I open my eyes and start writing His Salvation, Her Damnation. I'm rarely write an insanly obssesive character like Leon before revamp ver. Reading his character again, realising that man is a creep. But sure, he love Evelyn too much that he becomes toxic. Aku oun tak sangka terjebak tulis fantasi lmao. I might continue carry kn High Council Tsarina, because Nikolai character is based on someone in real life. My crush of course.
          
          Me when I have a crush on someone, I tend to be a but obsrrvant. He is actually quiet goodlooking, gym rat, had a lean figure, senior barista yang tengah menunggu panggilan TLDM. No wonder why he had that athletic built body because that man never ran out of energy.He is hella extrovert, loud and friendly. His fighting style is boxing i guess since he is often joining the competition-
          
          Anyway, I'm writing Nikolai as per him. We are quite close, so it's a bit hurt to be seen just friends lmao. I'm start jogging due to the stress too.

mini_lilac

Just some random thought
          
          Do you guys think inserting Felix early in part one of the srory is nessecary? Like before, he just got involved just because of Kai. Sebab banyak kali berurusan dengan Kai makes TRC thought that Felix is Kai bestfriend while them just friends with benefit to ride or die duo.
          
          Funny how each of them just take advantages of each situations become understanding towards each other. Like, Karina would be proud that Kai found his first real friends because that guy is hella antisocial from being Velhara itself. 
          
          Also, Felix is materialistic due to his past trauma that his mother is willing to sell him just to gain money. So he is coping with his sadness using money.
          
          Indeed, Felix bau duit. He is rich RICH.

mini_lilac

@RozeMoi he will get mention again, it was his fault for get involved with Cruz and Gabriella (that woman is crazy)
            
            Cruz warn him, second calls means death soo....
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RozeMoi

I like that he was mention early. And then when he got mention again in trc arc, readers will be like “OH IT WAS THAT DUDE IN CHAPTER (random number here)”
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mini_lilac

It's my offday... I guees I'm just shari g each main character song playlist
          
          I only have yt, already delete spotify years ago for some reason
          
          POV: DAVIKA KUZMINA
          
          https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLFVlMvvloZgY&si=kuIshnPCKDk3fMkG
          
          POV: LEON V. ZACHARY
          
          https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLJ7wbvVlkpfI&si=rQXh5EmQ-uPcISBd
          
          and I will make another plahlust for specific scene...

RozeMoi

HELL YEAH SONG PLAYLIST
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mini_lilac

another author on writer's group attacking me for making a cannibal FMC, they said rosakkan fikiran lepastu nak ke anak" saya baca nanti. And says I don't represent anything in my story
          
          first of all, I didn't consider for having child. kalau terkahwin dan ada pun, rezekilah. Tapi kalau boleh, I don't want it- (she is 27 y/o with no job btw)
          
          secobdly, the audacity to judge me while she is making dark romance based on 365 days movie with massimo in it. And mafia dark romance is judging me? Mafia but make it islamic for that man convert to islam. I don't think I'm the first author who make a cannibal character (fixi books are looking at me)
          
          maybe lah sebab FMC kanibal, I don't know.
          
          And my story do represent how revenge and self hate destroy someone, and sometimes it's better to let go of things that we can't control. Otherwise there is Davika who is a mad woman, because she blames everyone and everything for what happened. And she hates herself for it. And also, how love can be the strongest weapon, yet the venomous weapon (I don't know how to explain it lmao)
          
          also, since it's a bit political, it's just another sarcasm stories towards the higher in society. Maybe because some of wealth people are unethical. That's why jurang pendapatan sangat ketara dalam negara ya. And those rasuah dan ketidakjujuran atasan. 
          
          First,how did I come up with crazy concept? First of all I'm a bit deppresive with massive sui and intrusive thought, I always imagining things when I was teenager. (that's why I got warded LMAO) bila teringat and everytime I'm angry or numb, I will catat every scene so that I could use in this story (pls don't attack me) also, I got inspired by tokyp ghoul
          
          again, don't judge my story while you keep bragging how handsome your tyler with ai photo. Also, keep chatting your james ai bot all day long.

RozeMoi

@mini_lilac she’s obsessed with her own character lmaoo
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mini_lilac

@RozeMoi at first I was trying to get help since I got writer's bpock about how to create and solve problem? like how to make the character is actually doing something insted of doing bs. Then she asked me about my premis and what is exactly I'm writing. So I. TOLD. THEM.
            
            some of them like my ideas, even saging that I should try FIXI, but I'm not making this as a novel since you know? I will hundred per cent know this book will be banned. So that's why it's better to keep it here.
            
            there she comes. talk about her man, tyler hans and seeing my chat suddenly say FMC kanibal? Even make sarcastic jokes about it like mimicking scene when Davika is breaking down and saying stuff like how do you come up with this? and told me to censor my convo because there is underage kids in the group as if she isn't saying things about marrying older man and drooling over his MMC. 
            
            Like I didn't told people that we should be Davika lol. And deadass me counter her with-
            
            no wonder why you drop your school at early ages just because of work. Thinking you could achieve everything, like doing aything but study at that age. Melawan cakap parents sampai lari rumah semata" nak kerja sebab fomo tgok org kerja. Like??? (I know this because she is kinda oversharing things in group and laugh about it, the kids says slaysss and she said jangan contohi but still talk about it like?) and I'm still stays because that group had so many beta readers and another author yang berotak sikit
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RozeMoi

@mini_lilac “leon would never do that” tell me she never read your story before revamp. LEON DID EVERYTHING TO UNDO THE CURSE JUST SO SHE CAN LIVE NORMALLY EVEN IF IT COULD KILL HIM.
            
            And i can’t believe i’m saying this, Gabriella is probably way better than her penyondol character. Her character make sense, she has her own goal instead of chasing Leon.
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