mint_chocolatecake

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OpheliaNai

Hey I noticed that you were reading my story, I'm trying to edit the first book and I was wondering if you had any suggestions. It means the world to me that you have read so much in the first place, so please let me know :))

OpheliaNai

Oh ok thanks so much! There's more focus on the games in the second book. :))
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mint_chocolatecake

@mickeycheese21 hii I really enjoy your book! I don't really have any suggestions other than one but idk if it would be to hard to do, but maybe input the games more, I'm only saying that because they were really important in the original but maybe you want yours to be different idk. maybe they are there in the later chapters but I would maybe suggest adding more of the games. but other than that I have none. your story is really great, I really enjoy it!
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