mintaekook04

weasley20

hi!
          I just started a book called - 'Letting it go.' I was hoping if you could check it out and leave some feedback as it would be really helpful. It alright if you are busy. have a amazing day<3
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/275269403?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=weasley20&wp_originator=YMvMKIy0nCGRnL9KOxBdDl3YppSM7fRsyQw3Wblib2ik0kMVX7rv6xzCcKMo0ZXuDIDlbf9Th1jiWZbdddW1s7zNLx2lpWpTTnOUi6k37Y1hAnoR%2FAcWUXrO%2FJ7eyVV9

yammehog

Hey cherub maybe if you get the chance you’d check this out ❤️
          
          
          "Steady heartbeat... Body temp's dropping.” Jungkook looks up, watching in horror as Taehyung begins charging the paddles. “We can stop right here, okay? She can sleep it off and when she wakes up we just pretend that we followed through with it."
          
          "If you can't handle this then look away."
          
          "I can't just leave you here.”
          
          "Charging 200."
          
          "Come on! Tae this is crazy!” He shouts, slamming his palms down on the table. “We can’t!”
          
          "I thought you were going?" 
          
          "I can’t- You're murdering her!"
          
          “Move your hands or it’ll be the both of you.”
          
          “Tae-“ Jungkook heaves, recoiling his hands. “Please, just think about it rationally for a moment! This is a terrible idea, what if we can’t bring her back-“
          
          "Yeah, this isn’t exactly my idea of fun either…. I probably should've stayed in tonight but if we don’t help her with this, she’ll end up asking one of those sleep deprived first years." He grumbles pressing the pads to your chest. "3,2,1, Clear!"
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/276028050?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=yammehog&wp_originator=PhgJhT3jQDa6L%2F02q721eqZmJxAym%2F8yIJH4%2BmJa%2BoRGqQp9GnK71tykNhWwnhjNx8uplk24g%2BeVi8i3eX4nZ433ncw3LIU%2BO1Ej5yp6327FVVAkLQjKvKYYoQ7k%2BzKQ

mintaekook04

@yammehog sure I'll check it out. 
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Samravis

Hey,
          I see you have given my book a chance. I really appreciate it. My writing skills are under construction. I am experimenting with various skills.
          Hope I didn't disappoint you.
          Thank you once again!!!!!!!!!!!!

Samravis

@minteakook 
            Sure. I will~~~~
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mintaekook04

@Samravis It's fine honey. First few chapters are always hard. You're doing great though. If you don't mind, u can check my work too when you're free. 
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Samravis

@minteakook 
            Thank you so much. The first few chapters are a bit cringy. Pls don't mind that. I promise to do good in the rest of the chapters.
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