mintbars

Hi guys! I don't usually "promote" my stories but I am pretty darn excited for this one. Two chapters are out! Do give it a read, vote and comment. Thank you ♡
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/206587456

mintbars

Hi everyone! So I need y'alls feedback/input! If you have read rivals or husbands you would know I used to create characters that bickered in an almost "comedic" way. I have tried to steer clear of such characters since then...coz it felt repetitive. And since then I have had multiple books published and unpublished coz I didnt like the way I write or because I was running out of ideas. Let me know if you like the old character dynamic better or if you do enjoy the different dynamics I am trying to offer in recent stories. Thank you!

mintbars

@Briisafairy so usually my bickering is a bit witty and I felt like I was writing similar things at times...that's why and it would look like thats the only dynamic I can write lol and I am also trying to polish my writing, trying to increase the word count as well. Rivals and husbands was mostly just dialogues and small indicators– I reread it recently and I felt at times the flow was abrubt or even that the speaker could be confused at times...thats was in 2023 and I feel my style has changed a lot since then lol
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Briisafairy

Honestly I’m fine with either anything you write I enjoy!! It definitely gave me a good laugh with the characters bickers but something new can also be refreshing. I don’t have any preference on what I would like but I think having the characters bicker is ok and engaging I don’t think it’s very repetitive lol
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mintbars

Okay this stupid app is pissing me off- even my published chapters are shown as drafts and for some reason I got 11 drafts when it's only 7...and apparently it's not sending out notifications to my followers about a new part being posted either :(