Polllardii
I love your profile picture. It is so positive. I particularly like the saying 'Invest in yourself, it pays the best interest'.
I wish you well with your story. I can't promise to read too far as I suffer from fatigue and I am one of the older writers on here.
Polllardii
@mira_everlight - I hope my feedback helped. It is hard to write in a language which is not your own (am I right in thinking this?) You have done very well. I will try to read some more chapters.
mira_everlight
@Polllardii Thank you very much for your feedback. This is my first story book. Thank you very much correcting for me.