misakinniee

hey guys i texted my ex

MeowUrWeird

@misakinniee  noo bae, no... STAY STRONG BABES DON'T LET THE DARK SIDE WIN >:(
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misakinniee

hey guys i texted my ex

MeowUrWeird

@misakinniee  noo bae, no... STAY STRONG BABES DON'T LET THE DARK SIDE WIN >:(
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misakinniee

does anyone wanna comment ideas for new chapters ? i'm a little stuck rn and feedback would be great! because idk what should happen rn

blackmwlo

@misakinniee hii, my English isn’t that great, so if there’s anything wrong it’s probably because I’m getting some help from google translate.
            Could you make Reiner try to go after s/n, and something ends up happening that puts her life in danger. Because of that, Eren starts getting really paranoid about her safety.
            You could also make s/n, Eren, and Koa go on a trip together, just the three of them, and use that to develop their relationship as a group. During the trip, Eren and S/N could get into an argument, and then Reiner kidnaps S/N. 
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misakinniee

guys i'm so running out of ideas for dark lotus it's burning me out

4ng3l_wasp

hiii just wanted to say i LOVE your writing and have really loved this story lol! just some suggestions, but it’d be cool to learn more about what Reiner is up to, learn more into some characters backstories, or maybe the billionaire doesn’t take kindly into losing the bet at the casino or our kid sees something she shouldn’t or something. Those are just some suggestions, but ofcc take all the time you need writers burn out sucks lol! and tysm for writing literal masterpieces :))
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707otto

I’m starting to forget it, but the plot and your writing was amazing would love it if it had a ending no need to continue if it’s burning you out 
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iammynumberonehater

reiner like tries to kill us right and take koa but it doesnt work right but then eren saves us and just kills reiner right 
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707otto

So I binged dark lotus and I LOVEEE IT, definitely on my top eren stories. It was exactly what I was looking for I got tired of the Frat boy stories and OMG. I seriously love it so much , I hardly ever comment but that story is sooo underrated. I’m not done reading YET but if the story isn’t finished PLEASEEE CONTINUE IM LOVING IT, IM YOUR BIG FANN