missAarora421

Girls,
          	This is a request please learn self-defence to keep yourself and another girl safe. Always keep a pepper spray in your hand. Be bold. Don't be afraid of anyone. You should know how to scream,  how to fight. Do not be suppressed in the name of-  what society will think. 
          	
          	Shastra Uttalo Druapadi.
          	
          	Boys,
          	In India, females tie Rakhi to their brothers and take promise from them that they will always protect them. But promise to them that you will never make any other girl uncomfortable or unsafe.

missAarora421

Girls,
          This is a request please learn self-defence to keep yourself and another girl safe. Always keep a pepper spray in your hand. Be bold. Don't be afraid of anyone. You should know how to scream,  how to fight. Do not be suppressed in the name of-  what society will think. 
          
          Shastra Uttalo Druapadi.
          
          Boys,
          In India, females tie Rakhi to their brothers and take promise from them that they will always protect them. But promise to them that you will never make any other girl uncomfortable or unsafe.

Subha777

missAarora421

@Subha777 
            Some suggestions are-
            Try to use real photos instead of AI-generated images.
            Make the chapters a little short.
            Replace the hashtags with more searched ones.
            Add emotions to the dialogues and specify the character.
            
            I hope the suggestions will help you
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Subha777

Ohh….tqqq,, buddy……
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missAarora421

Hello @Subha777,
            I very much liked the plot and how the story unfolds. The title of the book is also very catchy. But I have some suggestions. If you want to know more, you can converse with me anytime.
            Your imagination can lead you to wonder ✨❤️.
            
            Best wishes,
            missAarora421
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