Laurawillington
Hi,
I read your story named NEUROTIC.
In my opinion, the story plot is good but when u write the story it shoulde be written in ur pov and not just describing ur scene.
U must take the story as ur life, be the main character and write down ur feelings, only then the story will have everyone's eyes.
Even though my story is not that great like i adviced u, I want to help in the growth of other people too. ^_^
Hope this will be an approachable piece of advice. ^_^
With love,
Anny.
miss_ecstasy_
Hello, thank you for your advice. I made Neurotic and my other books a few years ago so it’s not really up to date with my writing skills now, but when I have the energy and time I’ll try to fix up any mistakes I see.
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