Hello! I can't help but to point out the bad punctuation, spelling, grammar ect. If you would like to get more reads, I am here to help! I offer the help of fixing your problems (the ones listed above) without changing the moral of the chapter. If you would like the help you can get back to me or dm me on Instagram ((lukesxjandals)) and we can arrange for me to edit your chapters after you write them up. I don't mind if you give me a ton of chapters because I am currently taking my story slow. Hope you can get back to me! Thanks xo
