misscube642

Hi all! If you guys don’t mind, after reading my most recent story about Miguel can you guys leave some suggestions or feedback? It would be greatly appreciated  I am planning on continuing this story and big things are coming! Feel free to message me on here, or my tiktok, or my twitter @misscube642

fr_loser

@misscube642  Your writing is so detailed!!! I’m dyslexic, so sometimes I can’t grasp the scenario the same as someone else. But little things like describing the bar stool made it click for me instantly that I was at the bar lol. Or describing how Miguel can be sweet and cocky at the same time, describing our usual work days, it helped me get an idea of what each day should be like.
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misscube642

Hi all! If you guys don’t mind, after reading my most recent story about Miguel can you guys leave some suggestions or feedback? It would be greatly appreciated  I am planning on continuing this story and big things are coming! Feel free to message me on here, or my tiktok, or my twitter @misscube642

fr_loser

@misscube642  Your writing is so detailed!!! I’m dyslexic, so sometimes I can’t grasp the scenario the same as someone else. But little things like describing the bar stool made it click for me instantly that I was at the bar lol. Or describing how Miguel can be sweet and cocky at the same time, describing our usual work days, it helped me get an idea of what each day should be like.
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