missgrly

So new story.  check it out!!!

UnicornsBite

You should edit the format of your stories. Be more descriptive and put spacing between your paragraphs. Remember that when there is a conversation going they all get their own line, and is separated from other paragraphs. 
            Also you should take your time when writing. Give us more insight on their surroundings on characters instead of making it seem so rushed. It makes it harder to understand what is happening.
          
             With those simple tips your story will slowly progress to get better and better.

missgrly

@UnicornsBites okay, thank you so much for the help. I need as many tips and help as I can get!!  :)
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