missrosecluse

@RoseLovingGirl 
            Yeah I do. 

@RoseLovingGirl your good. Hey do you have a kik so we can give ideas 

@RoseLovingGirl 
            I see your account right now. I'm not doing anything, just letting you know.

@RoseLovingGirl 
            Now there is mystery. Who is 'them'? What did his father do? What will jacob do? What will Destiny do? This leaves more room to write.

@RoseLovingGirl 
            I did this on the spot so if it seems a little off, I didn't edit it.

@RoseLovingGirl 
            Girls that love romance (like me ^-^) love it when the girl gets touched by her man. It doesn't have to be a bad physical touch. This man wants to stay with his wife. Why not add a little spice?
            'Jacob's right hand grabbed Destinys waist, along with her left hand. His left hand grabbed her other arm, pressing it firmly on her back. Shocked, destiny tries to wriggle out of his grip; this only makes him hold her even tighter. "You will stay by my side. I wont let them get you, and i won't have a repeat of what my father did." when destiny tried to respond, Jacobs lips clamped over hers. 

@RoseLovingGirl 
            I think you should include marriage problems,AKA his obsession. Exploit that more. Sure he keeps her at home, but  is that all he can do? Just tell her? I think he has to do more than that. Something physical. (Not abuse) 

@missrosecluse just send me a link

@missrosecluse will do when I find some free time

@Theweirdgurlnextdoor 
            Yo. I am writing a new story. Appreciate it if you check it out. Tell me whats bad or good. 

@Pr0digyOfTheStars   alright. I'm on it.

@Pr0digyOfTheStars Its all in my Contest book :)

@Pr0digyOfTheStars sure. Just give me the details.