VireVerglas
'Eyo Miti! Just read your fanfic and wanted to punt this out to you: makin' my own horror/adventure alternative Miside story too! Shippin' it your way incase it's anything you might be interested in. Might not be your flavor of fanfic but would greatly appreciate if you wanted to take a look an' let me know whatcha think. Eventually I'm going to have alot of editing I needs do for it, the more insight I have from others the better I can focus in on what needs doin'
VireVerglas
@mitamisa If'n yah help me with my writing style man XD. Just to clarify, I was saying: if you help me review and hone my writing technique I'd be happy to creidt yah. Right now I'm working on pacing . . . that's always the most arcane and difficult portion for me. If'n after all the suggestions you are particularly helpful I'd be happy to credit yah.
VireVerglas
Hey dude if you managed to help me refine my technique in a way that feels like a central improvement for my writing I'd be stupid happy to credit you. Right now the story barely touches on any of the canon Mitas but there's a strong plan to pull in several later. Largely once the group uncovers 'the main player' memories. Course the group has so much drama going on it might take a hot minute till they can act on it XD. Feel free to let me know how you feel the pacing is. I feel I always write SLOW narratives, always want to figure out ways to pick up the pace without harming the characters or narrative but I always struggle there XD.
Anyways! Nice to meet yah, hope to see you around friend.
