Mitch Kid

Hello everyone, yes, I changed my profile to Mitch Kid and I have 3 more books that are in the works, and I'm not dead for anyone worrying, just author's block, two are elemental unite trilogy books, and one is something similar, but different, so, just letting you know

Mitch, you changed your name to Mitch Kid and I've never felt more honored.

YOUR PROFILE NAME IS MITCH KID
          
          I DIDN'T KNOW THAT
          
          ANYWAY HI

Well I'm not a writer due to the fact I can't spell my way out of a cardboard box. But I love to read , think to my self how I could make a scene better or what I would have done different and give advise where I think I can . So on that note I think I have a few suggestions for you. First point maybe give you characters some names instead of tornado/ tsunami  or what ever else names there are like that. Give them. Nick name Makes it more easier to make a fallow and have connection with them and keeps readers interested in the book. Second be more elaborate on things the smallest detail can be the balance between a good and amazing fight/love scene. Lastly try not to jump around so much from one pov to another . If you want to tell a different pov make a chapter for that one character don't have like 2-3 in a chapter because it gets confusing and hard to fallow. You want your readers to be able to read through the book with no problems. 
          
          Other then that you are off to a good start and I hope you are not offended by what I said. If so I'm sorry was just voicing my opinion. 
          
          With respect 
          Mitch 

Did you get wattpad back :D?

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So hopefully I'll finish Elementals Unite this time

Hello people

Mitch ;-;
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          You read mah story

Mitchell....lemme proof read ur stowy lawl