hi ! i'm a beginning writer and just want some feedback on this book ! 

the idea was sparked as a child when me and my friends would pretend we were in a different dimension and have powers and i thought... that's actually pretty dope maybe i should make it something lol.

 so i've been creating an actual story from it ! anyway i am really slow at writing so the updates may take a while sorry :/ anyway, hope you enjoy :) 

p.s this cover is so not permanent i will 100% change it soon