@Cameron-R-Lewis I really like your story, it was great. love the concept. And I really admire your writing skills. The way you write it was perfect. I can imagine the scenes easily. You have the ability to show your readers exactly what you want them to see. You have a pure talent, I hope I can write like you. Best author ever!!!
I've just read the prologue and and I know that it will be a great book...and would be a great movie... specially with Dylan as the lead actor...God! You picked the right lead character...his perfect...