VivicaNight

I would have PM’d you but it doesn't look like messages are a thing on wattpad mobile anymore o . 0 
          
          Since I am actually receiving feedback from you on my story, I figured I might as well take advantage of it. How do you think it is going so far? Is there anything I could do to make it better? Also I love ideas for things that could happen in the story, if you have any suggestions, please let me know 

VivicaNight

Thank you! I read a story of theirs before too they are super good!
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mjkaty19

Ahh she’s called And-the-children-too 
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mjkaty19

Hellooo again I personally think it’s really good so far as for suggestions I think it would be cool if someone like I dunno say broke on the the space station to like get info about Vader but ended up finding out about her or she got hurt and he’s like protecting her I dunno  I think theres a few good book to get like inspiration from like salvation, temptation things like that I can’t remember the writers name but I think it’s like “even the children”? I’ll check but she has good book so if you read her it might spark some ideas for you x
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