mjlove33

After taking in feedback from friends and Wattpaders, I've released v2 of Chapters 1 - 4 and added Chapters 5. I focused on character development (drive, personality) and dynamics and would absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE your feedback before I continue to edit the rest of the book. Thank you.

mjlove33

After taking in feedback from friends and Wattpaders, I've released v2 of Chapters 1 - 4 and added Chapters 5. I focused on character development (drive, personality) and dynamics and would absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE your feedback before I continue to edit the rest of the book. Thank you.

mjlove33

Hi all, I've uploaded two new pieces. One is a non-fiction piece about a UFO museum in my dad's hometown in Victoria, Argentina. The other is a fiction short about a man's quest to understand his girlfriend's spiritual choices, a bit funny/absurd. Enjoy!

mjlove33

Ok. My first four chapters are up and I've made substantial revisions including adding another character's POV and changing another character completely (Roya is now Shraddha and she's more involved). Check it out if you have some time! Gracias.

Cfunk3

Thanks so much for adding 'The Return' to your reading list.  The book is completed and I usually post once a week.  My goal is to keep you entertained with plenty of drama, romance, and, of course, a murder.  Please let me know if I don't hold up my end of the deal ;) I see you're also following @kristebelle isn't she an amazing poet?  I'm in awe of her!

mjlove33

Hi! yes, you hooked me on the first chapter! I'm going to keep reading and give you any of my feedback/impressions. @kristebelle is fantastic! Happy to find kindred spirits on here.
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