mle160

@ilive2babookworm  sure, I love reading other people's stories -- although I don't think I'm the best person to help u with the explicit stuff, since I rarely use things like that in stuff I'm writing -- maybe the most explicit story idea I have ok here would be "Kossing You Goodbye" but that's just mainly humor...u can check that out if you want! Otherwise, I'd be happy to give you feedback.

mle160

@ilive2babookworm  sure, I love reading other people's stories -- although I don't think I'm the best person to help u with the explicit stuff, since I rarely use things like that in stuff I'm writing -- maybe the most explicit story idea I have ok here would be "Kossing You Goodbye" but that's just mainly humor...u can check that out if you want! Otherwise, I'd be happy to give you feedback.

ilive2babookworm

I'm writing a story 2 and its actually on chapter 5 but I haven't published it yet. And I'll warn u there is some MAJOR explicit content, but u know....that's kinda what I like to write about and what I hope to experience some day :) I hope that once I publish it you'll check it out and give me some feedback