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All three of us are up for criticism when they are put correctly. Your's came out incredibly rude. If you could put it in a better way, I would love to learn and grow from your advice, hopefully pleasing you along with everyone else in the later chapters. (:

@_effortless_  Be prepared for good and bad criticism.

Seriously, your comment on The Naked Dare was uncalled for. The plot line is already set (COLLIN MOVING FORWARD THROUGH THE UNKNOWN FEELINGS HE HAS FOR JACKLYN AND TRYING TO BETTER HIMSELF) and the last three chapters were revolving around that. 
          
          Don't say we are writing like 11 year olds, because that is plain rude. Just because you don't understand the chapters, and why they are important to the book as a whole, don't insult us.

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@popsie11  just calm down let it go it was just my opinion I don't write stories so congrats to you for trying I just don't like your story I'm sure there's a story you don't like so let it go

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