@mo_jolaa
Hey guys, sorry it took so long to post this chapter. I had to consider so many different directions for the story before settling on this one. Looks I may be publishing new chapters once or twice in a month, please bear with me. I hope you continue this story with me and i hope you continue to enjoy it.
Thanks :)
Thanks for the follow! :)
Hello! I just wanted to thank you for following me! :)
@CMBwriter you are very welcome. I appreciate anyone that takes an interest in my work. I hope you enjoy it.
Hello there, I'm a bit new to this so I would love to have as much feedback as possible on my stories. Reviews are always welcome.
@CMBwriter Hmm i think i understand what you mean. I guess i was trying to keep the readers engaged by having something upbeat happen each chapter. I'll do my best and try your tip. Thanks.
@mo_jolaa Hello! I don't know if this will be much help, but one piece of feedback I have is to let things simmer more. What I mean is that the plot in Blood Inheritance is going super fast. That's not necessary a bad thing, since having a fast plot really works well for some stories, but I feel as though the reader isn't getting a lot of time to mull things over in their head. We're presented with a question, and then it's immediately answered, which I feel has lessoned some of the mystery it looks like you're trying to build up. Sorry if I didn't explain that very well. I'm not very confident in giving feedback, but I wanted to let you know anyway.