mochifrombts

Omg guys I will admit that I totally forgot to update today! But that’s okay because I will try my best to update on Christmas for a special chapter! Also Gayo Daejun is on that day.

Katrinskorean

Hey i really love your story and wait patiently your update . Recently I have began a story by my own but I don't know if the story  is coherent from the external view. Could you give me a feedback. There are only 2 chapters and I will update the chapter 3 tommorow.
          Story: please hold my hand

mochifrombts

I find the story very interesting and it’s just the beginning. As for improvements i think you could add speech marks (“” or ‘’) to show where dialogue starts and ends. And i don’t blame you for your spelling mistakes because English isn’t my first language either but make sure to add spaces between words so it looks neater. That’s all! And i really enjoy the story already, it makes me think about giving Junghyo another chance, so keep it up!
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