hi, would you mind checking out my story. Maybe critic it a bit and suggest ways to improve it? It's about a young rich boy who fights his attraction towards a bratty mean girl.
Thanks!!!
https://my.w.tt/UiNb/r8UaSTpRsI
OMG I absolutely love your intro it's is so damn relatable
HBK ❤️
ROHBK
TGGBB
AND SKITTLES IS LIFE
Also, yeah I'm pretty sure Grey loves Aqueela too ❤️