@just-taesing hai ummm yeah i came back and i saw that u finished ur storyyyyyyyyyyyy and i felt so proud. Like ur famous moots ( *internally screaming MoOt iS FaMoUS * ) So i finished it and i rlly liked it. Like i am convinced there is no way u get better cuz ur already perfect at writing <333 the story plot was just *chefs kiss* and the dialogue was pretty grounded which is something very good. Ill come back soon,,,its so kinda hard buttttttttttttttttttttttttt i have the story finished ._. i just need to edit and publish <//3