Missacar233
Love the pfp and background sexy af
myfakelife69
@mommysgoodgirl___ Thank you for sharing your thoughts! The lack of dialogue in the earlier chapters is intentional, as the focus is on Blake’s internal struggles and her isolation from the people around her. She’s not in a place where she has meaningful connections or conversations, and the narrative reflects her loneliness and emotional state. As the story progresses, and more characters enter her life, dialogue will naturally become more prominent. Additionally, the story will shift back and forth between first-person and third-person perspectives, allowing us to delve deeply into Blake’s personal experience while also exploring the broader dynamics and relationships with others. For now, the quieter tone and perspective choice are meant to immerse readers in Blake’s world and give insight into her character’s journey.
myfakelife69
Hey there! I’ve just started writing my very first book, and in the spirit of adventure, I’m randomly reaching out to a few people to see what they think. I figured it might be fate that I chose you! If you get the chance, I'd love for you to check it out. No pressure at all—if it's not your cup of tea, feel free to let me know. I promise, there will be zero hard feelings (just a small dent in my fragile writer ego).
mommysgoodgirl___
@myfakelife69 Hi, thank you for your explanation! As I said in my previous reply, I'm still going to read it till end. So, I look forward to it! Have a good day! (^‿^)
mommysgoodgirl___
@myfakelife69 Hi, again! LOL Okay, I'm gonna be brutally honest, PLEASE don't get mad or upset. This is my opinion. So, I read your story (only to chapter 3) and it's good but it's not my taste. Because it's more like narrator's pov and not the character's. It's doesn't have a lot of dialogue and this type of story make me bored. I know an author who have the same writing style like yours and it took a lot of my patience and time to finish reading their story since it's kinda have slow pace. BUT I'm still going to read it and I know I have to prepare myself LMAO. That's it from me (^‿^)
myfakelife69
@mommysgoodgirl___ Hi! Thank you so much for adding my story to your reading list—I’m really glad you liked the tags and synopsis! I hope you enjoy it when you get the chance to read it, and I’d love to hear your thoughts. Thanks again!
YuriC00kies
Hello I notice you were a reader of "The Lamia's food. I'm one of her friends that took over her old account. I'm not sure if you're aware but the author has moved to a different account.
@ Cookie4Yuri
Check it out if you want to continue reading it and feel free to deleted this message whenever.
mommysgoodgirl___
@YuriC00kies Hello! Thanks for informed me this. I'm actually greatful! Thank you again ( ꈍᴗꈍ)