monarchfrost

Hey did you forgot about the monster hunter fanfic or are you going to keep going?

For the Anubis story harem
          
          Character Sheet-
          
          Name: Liora Valen
          Age: 18
          Rank: A-Rank
          Race/Class: Aetherweave Sylph
          (A rare humanoid race attuned to refined wind, light, and emotional resonance. Known for grace, perception, and subtle battlefield control rather than brute force.)
          
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          Core Identity:
          
          -Alignment: Gentle Neutral → Protective Good
          -Role: Support-Control / Adaptive Duelist
          -Combat Style: Evasive, reactive, precision-based
          
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          Personality:
          
          Liora is kind, soft-spoken, and deeply considerate. She often listens more than she speaks, choosing her words carefully so as not to burden others. While shy in unfamiliar settings, she shows surprising courage when protecting someone she cares about.
          
          Complementary Traits:
          
          -Naturally empathetic; senses emotional shifts in others
          -Thoughtful and observant, often notices small details others miss
          -Loyal to a fault once trust is earned
          -Blushes easily when complimented
          -Strong inner resolve hidden beneath a gentle exterior
          
          Flaws (Humanizing, not diminishing):
          
          -Struggles to express her own needs
          -Doubts her worth despite her abilities
          -Fear of being abandoned again

Hey, we should definitely collab on your "Son of Cthulhu" Story if you check me out. You'll see why.

Hey when are you going to continue the monster hunter fanfic?

Hey do you wanna try to play monster hunter rise?

I would humbly ask that harry potter  story to be updated more frequently if possible or every week

Hi, sorry I took so long to reply. Things are so hectic after coming back. 
          
          Anyway, I took a look at your Kaiju Leveling book first. Nice story btw . Some feedback on it so far.
          
          To start, it seems like the MC knows a lot about the world he reincarnated in without even asking anything. Idk if the world he is reincarnated in is a world he already knew from his previous life, or the info about the world was given to him, or this is a completely new world you created yourself, but the MC knows a lot about the world already for a world he is newly reincarnated in if he doesn't know anything about it. Unless you meant to write it like that and the MC already knows about the world, I think you should add how the MC gained knowledge about the world, for example, from the system or from Aphrodite. 
          
          Secondly, it's kind of similar to the first one, but in the second chapter when the MC was claiming the land, he seemed to already know that was a system function without even asking and I didn't see it written anywhere prior in the story. You can just add a sentence stating the MC looked through the system functions and one of them was that though. 
          
          Third, the story is a little fast paced.
          
          That's it for now though. Sorry if that's a lot to read and I don't mean to offend. Just some friendly constructive criticism.