Hello! I'm actually new around here and just began to write my own story. It's not good enough for being a writer but I really try my best to write one. It would mean a lot if you could read my stories and comment on what changes I need to make in my story. You can also criticise me for my English, as I'm not a native speaker. I just thought it would be nice if someone could guide me to become a proper writer and you seemed like a perfect person.