monudiwedi

hey my preety reader actually I am writer and I do like to write umm i would say I don't write it as screenplay I do write is in novel theme style but i like to give depth to characters by giving and showing the reactions or things are happening arround them to showcase their wordings and actions for readers to understand the situation of storyline that's it . ❤️❤️❤️

Orchid_K13

@monudiwedi "i said it's merged up style because it's my theme of style" that's where you're wrong, sweetheart. I told you na you should just look up how the screenplay format looks like, then come to me. And you're definitely playing victim because you literally just updated that you won't write anymore when I pointed out your mistake. And I've read your story from the 1st chapter so let me tell you that your writing style in the initial chapters were in novel format (how you're supposed to write a novel) unlike the latest one. 
          	  If you go back to my very first question, I asked you if you're writing this as a screenplay. Then you said that it's your merged up style and all, instead of simply admitting that you're indeed writing it in screenplay format. And like I said, if you don't want to admit it, it's okay.
          	  
          	  Lastly, please go and search up the format of a screenplay. Then you'll understand why I'm saying all these.
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monudiwedi

@Orchid_K13 wait wait whatttttttttttt so basically I am just a normal person as a beginner and I just posted my writing style which is totally original my storyline my theme everything I did liked each comments which you did made my day but at very last of certain chapter you changed your whole perspective?
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Orchid_K13

@monudiwedi if you've known how a screenplay is written, you won't have said it to be 'your merged up style', because it's exactly the same. Anyways, I am judging your writing style because I can see the DIFFERENCE. I really liked your content, but unfortunately your writing is totally fake.
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rishupihuu

Bro bro ... 😐 why are you guys arguing about it so much .. Let it be however the owner of the story wants it to be .. If the readers like it then its not a thing to argue about i mean its whats wrong with you people yaar ... You guys should be focused on your own work ... And if you find flow in someone's story then its up to but most of the readers like it then there is no reason to be all worked up ... Chill and author-nim no need to quit your writing just block them brooo😉

monudiwedi

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monudiwedi

@rishupihuu wait come to insta we can talk there here it's hard to chat  if you are comfortable enough
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rishupihuu

@monudiwedi sooo? Am i younger than you well i doesnt matter
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monudiwedi

this message may be offensive 
@Orchid_K13  wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh   and ????  you know what abbb suno aap the fuck whatever I do it's my shit my buisness you could have been moved on but nii aap aye and i replied untill now in kind words aapko pta hain kabhi zindagi mein Bina dekhe try kr dena exactly bhot bhadiya cheez hotii hain aur agar even for 1 sec agar main sochu ki ai use Kiya hai toh still meri storyline achii thi people did liked didn't they ???

Orchid_K13

@monudiwedi very good!! You should stick to writing shayri, girl. And again you proved me right about you playing the victim. Rather than admitting your mistake, you just went on writing down some melodramatic lines, portraying yourself the damsel in distress and me the villain who's accusing you. Very good, girl! 
          And don't forget to search up the format of a screenplay ;)

Orchid_K13

@monudiwedi 1. Aap puch rahi ho ki woh actually polished screenplay tha ki nahi? Ek baat main aapse puchna chahungi ki aapko screenplay format na pata hote hue bhi, aapne kaise exact format me likh diya just because aap waisa writing style try karna chahti thi.
          2. Mujhe pata hai ki woh chapter eklauta chapter hai jaha pe aapne yeh style use kiya hai. Isiliye 19th chapter padne ke baad hi maine aapke message board me pucha ki aap screenplay format me likh rahi ho ya nahi. 
          Aapko format pata na hote hue bhi aap exact format me likh rahi ho just because you felt like trying that style, yeh toh possible nahi hai na.