libby🌙

Here's a small part of it! Please tell me what you think. I need people's opinion or else I lose my confidence to write more. 
          
          I started to walk towards Zach's car, and saw him fooling around with Bryce. They were smiling and laughing at each other while they kept hitting each other. Alex was there too, but he was just standing there with a blank expression. It took a few seconds for someone to notice me walking towards them, which was Bryce. When he saw me, he stopped playing with Zach, and stood a foot away from me.
          "Hey Lilly." he greeted me. 
          "Hello Bryce, did I interrupt your play date with Zach?" 
          He smirked, with the same look on his face that he always has. "Not at all. Zach kept stealing my toys from me anyway." We all laughed, accept Alex. Alex still stood there with the calm face. 
          
          "I'm inviting some friends to hang out at my house tonight. Your little lover boy will be there," he nudged Zach with his elbow, "Justin, Alex, and a few others too. We were going to hang out, have a couple of beers, and all that shit." When I heard Bryce say Justin's name, I immediately thought, 'I need to tell Jessica, but I don't want to guys to hate me for telling her.' I decided to ask him, "Is Justin okay? Jess has been worried sick about him."
          "Oh yeah, he's great, but as you know he's been pretty fucking depressed. He doesn't want talk about his problems yet, so I want all of us to hang out to make him feel better." Bryce said.
          "Should I tell Jessica that he's okay?" I asked another question.
          "Nah. We don't want Jess to storm in and start screaming at us." I nodded. Justin probably requested that.
          "So, you coming?" He asked for confirmation.
          "Of course. I never miss a get together." I confirmed. 
          "Great, we'll see ya there." Bryce answered as he walked away. A second later Alex followed.

Yeah imma post a small part of it. Hold on.

I feel like my story sucks. A part of me thinks, "I love it so much! Everyone is going to love it when I publish it!" And another part of me thinks, "it's so boring. Everyone will hate it." My reasonings are,
          1. Mentions many parts that took place in the show 
          2. Don't have a good plan on what should happen next part
          3. It feels so cheeky and obvious 
          4. Kinda boring
          Should a publish a small part of it here and tell me what you think? I'm probably overreacting but I really want to write a good story that people will like. Many stories I wrote before, I never got votes and very few people read it. 

I didn't realise how difficult it is to write dialogue lmao

I'm gonna start over. Sorry to those who were obsessed with my Bebo profile pic, but I have a new obsession: Zach Dempsey/Ross Butler. I might try to write a 13rw story soon, but I'm still keeping the halsanie story too. I just never got the confidence to write it since I'm not a big fan of halsey anymore, but I'll still try to write it for you all. :D have a good day/night everyone.