moonwalkerlouloute

Hey, if you want me to proof read your story, I have helped many of my friends on here just a suggestion pm me if you want. I will give you detailed spots on where the words are or what you can fix if you do. I know I am a little late for this, but I know this story can even get the spelling critiques to like it.with a bit of touch up and tbh it really doesn't need much just needs a teeny bit tlc done.

This is my second time reading your book. Enjoyed it greatly. Are you going to continue writing more stories? 

Lovely story
          
          You should write more 

Please start the second story soon I would love to read it. I love the first so much that I read it more than once. Keep up the amazing work and I hope that you write the sequel soon.

I really liked your story of my sniper mate, have you thought about making or having someone make a comic of this story because I don't think it's good. Also a sequel would be interesting

When is Sqeual to My Alpha Mate (boyxboy) cokingbout

Love your story

Hye author-san,
          
          I love your story. I'm just wondering if you are aware that your story is similar to another author. The title and story plot is similar. Or is it your account too?

I love your book and the development of your characters. The plot and storyline is different than most other books. 

Is English your first language?