Hey, if you want me to proof read your story, I have helped many of my friends on here just a suggestion pm me if you want. I will give you detailed spots on where the words are or what you can fix if you do. I know I am a little late for this, but I know this story can even get the spelling critiques to like it.with a bit of touch up and tbh it really doesn't need much just needs a teeny bit tlc done.