raymonty98
Hey!! I’m sure you know I’m obsessed with your story if you didn’t now you do lol it was my very first story I’ve read on this app and fell in love instantly. I just started my own. I would love to see what you think for a first timer, any opinions or feedback.
moonwalkinmachine
@raymonty98 right away I was emerged into the world and scenery and felt like a movie. I love fhe dramatics and the names too!! very creative and innovative story. I’ve read mj mafia stories on here and none of them has captured that feel of actually being in the mafia lol 10/10 I’m not a big reader anymore but I’ll make sure to tune in when I can!!
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moonwalkinmachine
I only read the beginning and I love it!! make sure you put michael jackson in your title so more people will click. Your writing is splendid for a first timer. I love it!!! <333
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