I have to say that I am a bit annoyed with you right now. I read your chapter where they hit the person with their car. how dare you reference what happened to Ellie in that, not only is that very disrespectful, but you keep pretending like you and her were really good friends. You didnt even go to the same school! also, when you are writing a book, you dont only want to be original refering to somebody that a lot of people knew and loved who passed away, you dont put them in their book unless you are refering to something good that happened in their life. I honestly think that you were the kind of person that would say that.
