morisago

@lapplan Yo thx for checking in lmao- but uh... yea, it could of been worse so...

@Jalynb2005 Oh and the Bio and Lovers part. I would recommend using spaces and better font/paragraph ideas to construct the page because as for now, it is kind of confusing. Also! Slowly build of to the plot. I doesn't matter how much chapters or how many words, it will be great bait for the readers and they will definitely be hooked with the book.

@Jalynb2005 Yo I just looked at your book, and to be honest, I think it's pretty good. Maybe use more phrases and words that could better explain some parts/or less since you don't want to do too much of it. But overall, I give it a solid 8.  Just don't forget the big picture of the idea of your story, and don't lose your motivation to write. 
            
            Hope this helps!
            PeacefulYazyu

@Jalynb2005 no problem lol but I need your opinion on one of my books the black beast guardian if you could ans see what I could improve.

@user83103997 Yo!!! Thx for checking in! Yeah... high school has been a real pain right now, plus I have testing coming up, so I really don't have that much time to write stories... But still, I will definitely continue to progress the stories when I have the time! Thanks!
            
            PeacefulYazyu