@Captain6000 Np!! Thanks for following back and for the compliment!! ❤
I guess one pointer I have is to look up synonyms to avoid word repetition. Also (and I'm really bad about doing this myself lol) is to not think that your work is super bad or cliche. You've been looking at it and reading it as you write so of course it's going to sound dull after a while because it's like re-reading a book over and over.
In other words, you already know what's going to happen, and even though you think it's obvious to the reader what's going to happen next, it usually isn't.
I really hope this was helpful and i'm so happy you like my writing!