I really liked your story Toxic especially the moment when the door cracks open and someone witnesses Atia and Myron the tension there hit so hard and completely shifted the scene. When you wrote that reveal were you aiming more for suspense or for emotional shock?
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@darkblonde1 Aww of course! It was my pleasure. I thoroughly enjoyed reading ‘The Lone Dove’ and am a huge fan of your writing style! Your words are so eloquent and beautifully crafted - it’s almost like watching a film. The dialogue was a joy to read, witty, and captured the personality of each character. I can’t wait to check out more of your works!